November 25
Today was the second to last day to work on our brochure. Analyzing our text on paragraph length, the AWL level, readability and grammar check. The expectations were 7.8% for the AWL, and 11 or higher for the readability. Most of my paragraphs were a little below the expectation. However, we managed to get it over the line. Most of my paragraphs needed a longer sentence in order to get a higher reading level, which was very difficult to do, as my paragraph had fewer things to say. However, pulling up the AWL level, were quite easier, as I looked through the list and tried including that vocabulary into the sentences. The grammar in the sentences was okay, but to sound more professional, there needs to be more effort put into the words. This is due tomorrow, so I thought that we should work on it more to get a good grade for the semester.
AWL 7.8
Today was the second to last day to work on our brochure. Analyzing our text on paragraph length, the AWL level, readability and grammar check. The expectations were 7.8% for the AWL, and 11 or higher for the readability. Most of my paragraphs were a little below the expectation. However, we managed to get it over the line. Most of my paragraphs needed a longer sentence in order to get a higher reading level, which was very difficult to do, as my paragraph had fewer things to say. However, pulling up the AWL level, were quite easier, as I looked through the list and tried including that vocabulary into the sentences. The grammar in the sentences was okay, but to sound more professional, there needs to be more effort put into the words. This is due tomorrow, so I thought that we should work on it more to get a good grade for the semester.
AWL 7.8
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